A likeable comic. Colouring is very well done in some panels, and less adequate on other panels. The toning for shadows is mediocre, and seems quite rushed.
Linework is a bit messy, and in this case doesn't add to the comic, especially on page 4. Plot is predictable and typical of comics like these, so it is acceptable and adequate.
Artstyle should be enjoyable for most, because thick thighs are thick thighs.
6.5/10. This is an enjoyable and good comic so far, but the sometimes messy linework and occasionally questionable colour choices detract from it.
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PoCUMon
the fuck did i just fap to
good art 10/10
Welcome to the Pokeslut center! How may we service you? Please kill me
Can i get a nurse joy and officer jenny on the side.
Wish this was irl, could have as many girls as I want
Hell yh he is *
He'll yeah he os
ksi gonna beat jake fucking paul >:)
It's Logan Paul you ill ridden child
no its jake stupid he already beat logan
A likeable comic. Colouring is very well done in some panels, and less adequate on other panels. The toning for shadows is mediocre, and seems quite rushed.
Linework is a bit messy, and in this case doesn't add to the comic, especially on page 4. Plot is predictable and typical of comics like these, so it is acceptable and adequate.
Artstyle should be enjoyable for most, because thick thighs are thick thighs.
6.5/10. This is an enjoyable and good comic so far, but the sometimes messy linework and occasionally questionable colour choices detract from it.
You forgot to center the font
WTF
Moreeeee
All of your usual appearances, good comic I guess, or bad comic, it's not finished yet idk.
Ok
blue hair is uh some girl from geoexe thing and red hair is agni
I feel like the whole "oh no I lost the er-battle and I have no money" trope is over-uh used at this point
There is potential here, don't get me wrong
But it does need more
Cthuwu when will you wake up my lord from your great slumber
Give me a few more years,
I'm still getting ready
Dude you can just say you're still trying to figure out how to give yourself head with all those tentacles it's fine we understand
Jeez, you fucking killed him! Damn.
He didn't kill me, he just hit the nail on the head
5/10
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